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The shadows weep as the rain falls,
drowning and destroying the light from above.
The world is a weakness of constant sin,
a machine made to be broken,ticking,ticking away.
And when it is finished and can tick no more,
there will not be redemption,
nor lore, nor more,
nor for the most powerful man.
For even the most powerfuls man`s,most powerful tower,
it shall stand tall no more.

Forever it will fall,and be reduced to ruble.
And all that shall remain is the rain so suddle,
man drowning with his face in a puddle,
deepest blackness providing eternal trouble.
And yet all the torture will never cease,
but move faster,move on the double.

So forth the pain and fuss,
will be as relentless as us.
The agony,and the distortion,is nothing,
as forgiving as an abortion.

For those who give away there child,
into the wings of death,
dying before ever receiving a title.
It is those we see,
and those we know,
it is they,they who need to go.

For what we don`t see is the true victims,
the ones killed,the abortion in the docters kitchen.
And so we lay them down to sleep,
just as they did to there children,
and they diden`t even weep.

I suppose its true,
that u will reap,
all that lies inside,
thats true and deep.
No longer on there feet,
but on there knees,
they are begging, begging me.
For all the suffering and pain they delivered,
I held the knife up, as I shivered.

God have mercy upon there soul, so now as the world ends,and it begins to snow, it is they, yes they who need to go. There blood will be like the rivers,that will fornever flow.
©2005-2009 ~ShadowPhilosopher
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Author's Comments

This a poem I can only anticipate will be somewhat controversal amung those who read it, this poem is against the dark deeds of the world, mainly abortion. Before making assumptions that its rubbish take a good read, you might like what you see. I wrote it along time ago, and though this quality of poem is somewhat typical of my newer poems, back when I wrote it, it was among my better poems at the time. It is very mediphorical, and you`ll find connections throughout all of it when you read it more then once. Its one of my "favorites."

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:icongratzius:
Well, while written extremely well.. I'm going to have to go with the initial thought you had of those reading it. I do agree that abortion isn't a good thing, obviously, but I think it should be the last resort. If you are going to bring a child into this world that is not a loving environment, then you should not bring it at all. Of course, you can put it up for adoption to a loving couple that could not concieve their own child, which is amazing if you can do that. But to those drug abusers who get knocked up, that is just unjust to even finish the birthing process, since that child is only going to suffer throughout it's life.

And that's my opinion! But I still really like your wording and such nn;

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"Life is easier to take than you'd think; all that is necessary is to accept the impossible, do without the indispensable and bear the intolerable."
Kathleen Norris

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